文中从句数量过少;文中词汇表达较丰富恰当,但高级词汇稍显不足;层次不够清晰,文中很少使用衔接词。
Sam's daily life Sam gets up at six o 'clock yesterday. Then go to the park by bike, he had a good time in the park. Noon and parents eat lunch at McDonald's. Sam and his classmates in the school play basketball in the afternoon, from 4 PM to 6 PM. After dinner, Sam and his father walk together, his father bought him a piece of classical music CDS. This day Sam had how interesting!