语句间的衔接成分用得不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;文中一些从句的使用为文章增色;文中能使用多样的词汇表达,也能较好的使用一些高级词汇。
I have a good friend, and this friend is younger than me a lot , I am 26 years old and he is 13 .Why can we be friend , it is because his mum is my cousin , and they live next to me , so we become good friend . He alway come to my home to play computer game and so absorb in doing this , and this lead him to behave bad in his sutdy. His mom is worried about his study , but he still be careless of it . But it is no doubt that he is very clever that he can always has something very unique opinion when you discuss something with him, it totally will surprise you .