单词拼写做得很好,请注意积累词汇量;加强一些长句和复杂句的使用;语言不流畅。
Sam wake up yesterday.then take a bike to park. then play very happy. and had a dinner with her mother and father at McDonald. in the afternoon,and play basketball with friends after dinner .sam and father went for a walk.The father bought a music CD to him.what a funny with Sam!