七年级英语下册 Unit10 单元 测试卷写作范文：有趣的一天

词汇表达不够丰富，要增加高级词汇的使用；从句使用量不足；上下文衔接欠佳，文章层次欠清晰，建议加强连接词和衔接词的积累。

Sam woke up at 6 o'clock yesterday ,then he wen to the park by bike, he was happy in the park.He have dinner with his parents in the McDonald's.He play basketball with his classmates in the afternoon, from 4 o'clock till six o'clock .After the dinner, he went for a walk with his father, who buy a classic cd for him.How interesting a day for Sam!