能够运用简单的从句,但不熟练;上下文衔接欠佳,文章层次欠清晰,建议加强连接词和衔接词的积累;文中拼写错误稍多,词汇表达贫乏。
Sam get up at six o'clocK in the moning.Then he go to the pack ,he pleas the haper.parese and he go to the maidanglang in the lunch .Sam pleas the basketber with he cleseroom in the afternoon,is four o'clock till six o'ciock.in the dinne ,sam and father go for a walk, her father buy musion