文章词汇表达要更加熟练,希望能更多使用一些高级词汇;增加一些从句的使用,文章会更不错;连接词过少,建议增加衔接词汇的积累。
Heiio.My name is king Lucy.I come from the UK.I usually speak English.I wanted to a Pen pal in the chinese.Because I ever like chine.I want to take some the sports with my chinese.Let's go to the music and watch the movies.If can you with me become pen pal ,Im going to appreciate.