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Yesterday Sam got up six o'clock.And then ride the bicycle go to the garden,in the garden he was very happy.In McDonald's ate lunch with his parents at the afternoon.In the evening Sam and his classmate play basketball in school,four o'clock till to six o'clock. finished dinner,Sam and father together go for a walk, father give his old music CD,this day Sam is very delighted.