文章词汇表达比较灵活,高级词汇的使用要继续加强;从句使用量不足;全文结构不够严谨,文中很少使用衔接词和过渡词。
Yesterday Sam got up six o'clock.And then ride the bicycle go to the garden,in the garden he was very happy.In McDonald's ,he had lunch with his parents at the afternoon.In the evening Sam and his classmate play basketball in school,from four o'clock to six o'clock. finished dinner,Sam and father together went for a walk, father bought his old music CD,this day Sam is funny day