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Nowadays,the phenomenon of excessive packaging of goods are prevailing in our society:imported bottles of group wine are packed in wooden boxes, fruits are sold with hand-woven basket,and so on. There are some causes for this phenomenon.On the one hand,most consumers may pay attetion to the quality of goods will attach importance to their packaging,because they hold that the more delicate the package is, the more quality the goods have.Secondly sellers,who weight the economic value heavily understand that they will profit from making exquisite packaging, because most consumers look highly of it. As far as i am concerned,Excessive packaging impact badly on the environment and resource.so,effective measures should be taken in this problem,First, laws should be made to restrict the company that have actions of excessiving package. In addition, consumers should raise awareness of environment protection and eliminate the idea that delicate packaging reflects the quality of goods.