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2012年6月英语四级作文真题:过度包装的现象

发布时间:2013-05-17 11:41浏览次数:9787
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题目 On Excessive Packaging
要求
1.目前许多商品存在过度包装的现象
2.出现这一现象的原因
3.我对这一现象的看法和建议
字数:120满分:100分
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采用了恰当的衔接手法,层次清晰;作者英语功底扎实,可适当调整文中从句数量;作者词汇量积累不错,能较灵活地使用高级词汇。

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Nowadays,the phenomenon of excessive packaging of goods are prevailing in our society:imported bottles of group wine are packed in wooden boxes, fruits are sold with hand-woven basket,and so on. There are some causes for this phenomenon.On the one hand,most consumers may pay attetion to the quality of goods will attach importance to their packaging,because they hold that the more delicate the package is, the more quality the goods have.Secondly sellers,who weight the economic value heavily understand that they will profit from making exquisite packaging, because most consumers look highly of it. As far as i am concerned,Excessive packaging impact badly on the environment and resource.so,effective measures should be taken in this problem,First, laws should be made to restrict the company that have actions of excessiving package. In addition, consumers should raise awareness of environment protection and eliminate the idea that delicate packaging reflects the quality of goods.

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