错误句子很少,但从句使用不熟练;文中用词稍显贫乏,单词拼写还要加强;结构不严谨,行文不流畅。
Sam got up at six o'clock yesterday morning,than went to the park by bick.He had a pleasant time in the park.in the afternoon,he had lunch at McDonald's with his parents.Later the afternoon,he played baketball in the school with his classmates from four o'clock to six o'clock.After dinner,Sam went for a walk with his father,his father bought a muice CDfor him.Sam had a interesting time in this day.