错误句子很少,但从句使用不熟练;作者词汇量有些小,要注意检查拼写错误;结构不严谨,行文不流畅。
Sam got up at six o'clock yesterday morning, than went to the park by Bick. He had a ball in the park. In the afternoon, he had lunch at McDonald's with his parents. Later the afternoon, he played baketball in the school with his classmates from four p.m.to six p.m.. After dinner, Sam went for a walk with his father , his father bought a muice CDfor him. Sam had a interesting time in this day.