错误句子很少,但从句使用不熟练;文中单词拼写做的不错,另外再增加词汇量积累就更好了;结构不严谨,行文不流畅。
Sam got up at six o'clock yesterday morning, than went to the park by Bick. He had a ball in the park. In the afternoon, he had lunch at McDonald's with his parents. Later the afternoon, he played basketball in the school with his classmates from four p.m.to six p.m.. After dinner, Sam went for a walk with his father, his father bought a mucie CD for him. Sam had a interesting time in this day.