文中词汇表达贫乏,但是单词拼写做的不错;错误句子很少,但从句使用不熟练;结构不严谨,行文不流畅。
Sam got up at six o'clock yesterday morning, than went to the park by Bick. He had a ball in the park. In the afternoon, he had lunch at McDonald's with his parents. Later the afternoon, he played basketball in the school with his classmates from four p.m.to six p.m.. After dinner, Sam went for a walk with his father, his father bought a music CD for him. Sam had a interesting time in this day.