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Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.
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Nowaday,more and more people pay much money in eduction.They want to take highter eduction so that get highter degree.They alway believe that high degree is the key of good job,which cause the disblanace sociation.Acroding the study of U.S.A,more and more people have high degree,lead to many company emploies the people who has highly educated.thun,many people in dry dock.
