文章词汇表达比较灵活,高级词汇的使用要继续加强;增加一些从句的使用,文章会更不错;建议加强过渡词和衔接词的积累,文章结构不严谨。
Tom's rules Tom is a good boy. He get up at six o'clock. Then, he will go to school at 6:15. As a good boy, he never eat outside. Always, he don't lisen to music on school days. He like to listen to classmate when he was free. On school nights, he don't watch Tv. He will go be home by 12:00 in the morning and 9: 20 in the evening. This is Tom's rules.