错误句子很少,但从句使用不熟练;文中词汇丰富度不足,拼写检查也要重视;结构不严谨,行文不流畅。
Sam got up at six O'clock yesterday, then he went to park by bike. He had a good time in the park. He had a lunch in Mc Donald's with his parents. Sam palyed basketball in school with his classmates in the afternoon, and they played from sixteen O'clock till eighteen O'clock. Sam went for a walk with his father after dinner, and his father bought a CD with classicai music for him. How interesting a day did Sam have.