2011年12月英语四级作文真题:坚强的意志

文中衔接词和过渡词使用的很棒；作者词汇基本功很好，高级词汇表达也比较恰当；作者句法知识扎实，可适当增加从句的使用。

As an old saying goes, sword does not wear the stone as water does, Which reveals is that nothing succeeds without a strong will. Why a large number of people think that smoke-quitting seems easy, but it is rarely achieved? There are some main factors that can accout for this phenomenon.First and foremost, people can achieve something over and over again in a short time may imply its easiness, while in a long ,the consequences may turn to be opposite.Second,someone may give up in the halfway because they are attracted by the temptation.Moreover,they can't believe in themselves to have the ultimate succeess.In contrast,people who can accomplish the great mission has a strong will. For our students, if we hope to become a useful people in the future, we should concentrate our mind, energy on our study exclusively,in addition when we try to finish something ,we should have enough will because nothing succeeds without a strong will.