2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):手机

语句间的衔接成分用得不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；从句使用很不错，再接再厉；作者词汇量积累不错，能较灵活地使用高级词汇。

As is shown in the picture, looking at their cell phones is already a default mode when people cross the street,What the drawing reveals is that people nowadays,especially young people are growing increasingly depend on the phones. It is true that the technology products what are represented by phones have brought the great convenience to people,however,just as is illustrated in the picture,the overuse of it lead to a lot of terrible consequences.First and foremost, when people cross the street,looking at their phone is a dangerous act.People are attracted by the important content they think of,which make them ignore the traffic,eventually,the tragedy is likely to happen.Second the more use of phone,the fewer oppotunity that people have to communicate face to face in our daily life.What's more when we concentrate on using phone,we will not do what we should have done,which reduce our effiency. As far as i am concerned, effective measures should be taken,because overuse of the phone lead to a series of bad consequences ,the awareness of using phones rationally and appropritely should be raise to people.