2015年高考作文优秀范文：中秋节

从句比重偏低，有几处句子错误；层次分明，但过渡词欠缺；文中词汇表达较灵活丰富，不过请检查文章的单词拼写。

Dear sir,today is chinese traditional festival namely the Mid-Autumn Festival.This festival is coming in Augest of chinese lunar calendar.This festival is one of the most important festival s in china ,it inital a legend in acient china. According to traditonal custom,the family will gather together to eat moon cake and admire the full moon at that day. however,people gradually start to travel in morden China because the festival became pubic holiday.