2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

作者词汇量积累不错，能够较恰当地使用高级词汇；语句间的衔接成分用得不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；可适当增加几条从句。

Nowadays,With the development of economic and technology,the phenomena of Online shopping are prevailing in our society.Online shopping becomes a fashionable ways of life, which provides us with a lot of convenience. However,sometimes consumers who feel that they were deceived were angry when they shop online because it is common that the internet fills with fake.What’s more,the false information also disturb people's life,which lead them make wrong decision. As far as i am concerned, several effective measures should be taken to solve these problem.Firstly,The laws and regular should be built.Secondly,sellers should also need to comply with business rules.Last but not least,we should also raise our awareness of rational online shopping.