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采用了恰当的衔接手法，层次清晰；文中词汇使用灵活，高级词汇使用较丰富；从句使用很不错，再接再厉。
Nowadays,the phenomena that parents arrange everything for their children are prevailing in our society.Children won't worry about their basic necessities in their life due to the arrangement of their parents,which cause a series of terrible consequences:they will in lack of the ability of decision-making in their growing up.What‘s worse,when children study or work alone, they don’t know how to take care of themselves. From what has been disscussed above,I think that several effective measures should be taken to solve with this problem.First and foremost,children should have chance to see the world around them individually in order to let them understood that there are various competitions and friends in their life.Secondly,when face with problem in their life,with the purpose of improving their independant problem resolving capability,parents shouldn't intervene too much.Additionally,it is impossible to ask children to be independent in a short time,parents should give their children help and encouragement when their children feel lose. All in all, to be independent is vital, because parents can't help children on their whole life,only an independent person can enjoy a meaningful life.
