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Sam goes to bed at six o'clock yesterdaythen rided his bike to park,he has a good time .he and his parents had lunch in McDonald's at noon.Sam and his classmate played basketball in the afternoon,from four to six .After supper,sam and his father goes for a walk,his father buyed a classical CD for he.So interesting day!