词汇表达不够丰富,要增加高级词汇的使用;错误句子很少,但从句使用不熟练;结构不严谨,行文不流畅。
Sam goes to bed at six o'clock yesterday then rode his bike to park,he has a good time .He and his parents had lunch in McDonald's at noon.Sam and his classmate played basketball in the afternoon,from four to six .After supper,Sam and his father go for a walk,his father bought a classical CD for he. Interesting day!