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2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第1套):网络教育

发布时间:2014-06-09 15:37浏览次数:9039
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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the internet on learning and then explain why education doesn't simply mean learning to obtain information. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

用户的作文(系统评分77.5分
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从句使用很不错,再接再厉;语句间的衔接成分用得不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;作者词汇量积累不错,能较准确地使用高级词汇,单词拼写要仔细。

用户练习作文:

Recently,the internet has exerted great influence on education,an increasing number of individuals value it as a truth that obtaining information from internet is equal to education.However,what the picture reveals is that education involves more than simply learning to obtain information. As far as i am concerned,Education involves cratical thinking and practical skills instead of a mere accumulation of information and knowledge.For one thing,cratical thinking is the essencial to scientific progress,contributing to the innovation and technical advance,just as Confuzi warn us"Learing without thinking lead to confusion.For another,it is significant wo apply what you have learned to practice,which is also the reason why teachers think highly of the transformation between knowledge and application,which internet can not provide for us. All in all,Internet offers a way to accumulate information easily for us,but people should be fully aware of the essence of education and the transformation between knowlegde and application.

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