2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

文中句子偏简单，可增加从句使用量；衔接成分太少，文章结构欠佳；文章用了较为丰富的词汇，学术词汇略显单薄，同时注意单词拼写的检查。

Computer and Man Since compter was invented, it has became a neccessity in our daily life. We use it search informations on Internet, buy things on shopping net, communicate with our friends and so on. We can see it whenever and wherever. However, is't good or not? On the one hand, it give us so much convience to our life. Most things we can solve through it. From math problems to buy clothes. It save our energy and time. On the other hand, man has become more and more depanded on it. Some of us even can't write the correct words. The most basical ability of writing. And they are crazy about it and lose connection with the real world. In my opinion, computer is a useful too for us to solve some matters. But we can't be addicted to it. We invent it to change the world, not to make fool of us.