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2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第3套):网络沟通

发布时间:2014-06-09 15:41浏览次数:12880
要求:

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the Internet on the way people communicate and then explain whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.


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有效地采用了多种衔接方法,层次清晰;文章词汇表达多样请继续保持,也能较准确地使用高级词汇,作者句法基本功不错,可适当增加从句的使用。

用户练习作文:

With the development of society,internet has exerted great influence on communication,as is vividly shown in the picture,teenagers can communicate with their parents online.Although internet has changed the way of communication, I don't believe that electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact. Here are some reasons that can support my point of view. First and foremost,face-to-face contact can make people concentrate on what they think about,so they can think about problems seriously,while communication online can't. Secondly,electronic communication can eliminate distrust between the two sides,because people won't be suspicious about the other side if they communicate in such a direct way.Last but not least,electronic communication can't guarantee one’s honesty,which is often exposed in some cheating events. All in all,face-to-face contact involve more than simply online communication,so we should create and grasp oppotunities to communicate with friends,parents face-to-face.

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