2013年考研英语作文预测话题：沟通的意义

行文稍显不流畅，应增加文中衔接词的使用；文中从句比重偏低，可在平时多加记忆好的句子；部分学术词汇用的不错，但拼写检查还需加强。

there are a host of communications in our lifes,and it wii not image ,if all of communications are eliminated.it can be admited that the communications is a necessary thing for our world. there are some advantages about the communications that is emerged between you and others.firstly,we can learn many excellent skills about any spect or different expirence how to solute some troubles from others.secondly,the bridge of friendship will be built by the communication between people.human will live in the harmony socialty where have a atomosphere of happiness.thirdly,as to our country,the communication is helpful to strenghen a contant condition of socialty and stimulate the speed of ecomomic' growth. but,anything have two sides,so the communications also have some harmful effort to human beings.if these message that people are talking about are unhealthy,our purity of soul will be stained and quality of mental will decend.as a result,we might crime possiblely. so,let's become a smart talker and listener,and enjoy our remain time.