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A name is the representantion of a thing or person, it plays an important role in social recognition, just as an old saying goes"a thing is the entity of a name". However, people have diverse opinions on this point, some people think that the name is important, while the others maintain the other way round. From my perspective, a name is of great importance for it distinguishes one thing or person from others. We can't ignore the importance of the name,because no one can live in our society without identification.Once a person gets a recognition, his social life starts. Additionally,a special name will be easily accepted by a group or a person because the deep impression of the name leaves. As for products or companies, a great name closely related to future of their development. Here is a relevant case which can illustrate my point well. Iphone, a famous brand of a mobile phone, which makes people impressed, stimulating their desire to buy. All in all, a name is closely associated with a person,a product, and a company. Having a great name is the key to our success.