衔接词和过渡词用的很不错;从句使用量不足;作者词汇基础不错,注意极个别的拼写错误。
classmates, English become more and more important as globlized development. Our country need to contact and trade with other country in the world now, therefore, china need a lot of persons who can speak English very well. Classmates should hold this chance to learn English. In fact, English is not too difficult, we can rapidly improve our English level by following 3 steps.first we should learn the grammar and words in the book.then, we should read English aloud at least 30 minutes everday,finally,we should watch more the English movie or news.