题目 Should parents send their kids to art classes?
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Recently,the phenomena that an increasing number of parents send their kids to art classes are prevailing in our society, which reflects the expectation of parents for their children. Some people value it as a truth that the more children learn, the more successful they are in the future. while the others maintain the other way round,they think that art classes does not necessarily help the future of their children. As far as I am concerned, making decision that whether to send their kids to art classes is based on the their kids' interests. Here are several reasons that can support my point of view, First and foremost, just as the old saying goes“interest is the best teacher", if kids are interested in learing art, sending them to art classes is a wonderful way to improve their artical level. Second, if they don't like art,it would be a waste of time, so it is unnecessary to send them to learn art.Last but not least,Learning art is a thing that needs to adhere for a long time,so once parents send their kids to learn art, they can not stop for a short period of time just for a simple reason. All in all, parents need to know whether their kids like art or not, then decided whether to send them to learn art.
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