小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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Lili is my best friend. She is not tall , but she is very smart .She looks cute when she smiling She is slim. She has long black hair, she wears a pair of glasses. Llili likes singing very much and she can sing beautifully,She also likes watch films, we go to cinema at our free time.