文中词汇使用较丰富,但高级词汇使用太少;可适当增加几条从句;过程性词汇偏少。
Dear John, Thank you to invite me to your family for dinner, in fact i eagar to see you and have dinner with you. But i am so sorry, I can not go to your home because i have to take the exam in day after tomorrow.This test is very important to me, if i can not pass the exam,maybe i can not graduate from high school.i think that we can make reserve another day to have dinner togather when both of us are free time.have a good days and enjoy the dinner. Best regards li hua