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Recently, the phenomenon that an increasing number of people are crazy for getting a certificate is prevailing in our society, which causes a series of hot topics. Just ask a student why he or she is busily engaging in doing, you may get some kinds of the answers that he or she has prepared. The reason for this phenomenon is common—the enormous pressure of finding a job, most people value it as a truth that the more certificates, the easier it is to find a fantastic job. Another factor which can account for this phenomenon is that certificates still weigh highly in terms of signifying one's ability. In order to increase the probability of getting a good job, people are compelled to run from one exam to another. From my perspective, people should be more rational when it comes to certificates. It is unnecessary for them to focus on the certificate examination, on the contrary, concentrating on learning and ability boosting is beneficial for them to get a fantastic job.