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词汇表达较灵活准确，学术词汇使用过少，另外注意文中个别的拼写错误；可适当增加复杂句和从句的使用；层次不清晰，几乎没有使用衔接词。
Tina wants to go to Beijing to see the Great wall and other beauitful sights in Beijing. She thinks she will have fun there. Jim said he wanted to stay at home because the hard work at school made him too tired and he wanted to have a good rest in the coming summer vacation. I plan to visit my hometown. I left my hometown two years ago, so i miss my friends very much. I will go to see my teacher when i was there. I want to see what changes they have and I will tell them my experince at the this city
