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2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第1套):网络教育

发布时间:2014-06-09 15:37浏览次数:9074
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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the internet on learning and then explain why education doesn't simply mean learning to obtain information. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

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作者词汇量积累不错,能够较恰当地使用高级词汇;语句间的衔接成分用得不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;从句使用很不错,再接再厉。

用户练习作文:

As is vividly shown in the picture, a student uses internet to obtain information in the quiz, what it reveals is that the Internet provides convenience for us in our learning, however, does it mean all the education that we need? I don't think so, here are several reasons that can support my point of view. First and foremost, Learning involves more than collecting information, including understanding of knowledge and application in practice, which is more significant than knowledge itself. Secondly, thinking about information is the essential to the studying, research and innovation, just as Confuzi said " learing without thinking lead to confusion". Last but not least, we may ignore the importance of study, when we depend on it excessively, because we may think that having the internet is having everything. All in all, although Internet is a surely useful fool, which can help us learning more efficiently, we can't depend on it excessively, otherwise, it will cause a lot of problems in our studying.

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