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2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第1套):网络教育

发布时间:2014-06-09 15:37浏览次数:9033
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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the internet on learning and then explain why education doesn't simply mean learning to obtain information. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

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文章词汇表达多样请继续保持,也能较准确地使用高级词汇,语句间的衔接成分用得不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;作者句法基础较为扎实。

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As is vividly shown in the picture,a student is doing excellent student report on the podium, at the same time, the audience are anxious for him, some people prepare towels for him, some applaud him for his courage ,however, the reporter failed in the mental test,what it reveals is that nowadays, some students can make fantastic results in the study while their psychological quality is not qualified. There are several factors that can account for this phenomenon, first and foremost, an increasing number of students are dependent on their parents excessively in their daily life, which means their parents solve all the problems for them, and they don’t need to worry about anything . Secondly, they experienced too little in their life, so that they are at a loss when they face the challenge. Last but not least, Students don’t attach importance to the improvement of their psychological quality. From my perspective, psychological quality is as important as study results, we need it anytime anywhere, so we should arouse students’ awareness that it is of great importance to improve their psychological quality.

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