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初一英语作文模拟题:我的理想

发布时间:2013-05-16 14:56浏览次数:2029
要求:
以“我的理想”写一篇作文。
要求句子通顺,语法正确,卷面干净,书写规范。
要求不少于60个单词。
用户的作文(系统评分71.5分
评语:

作者词汇表达较为熟练,学术词汇使用不是很多;作者句法不错,但是文章整体句子稍微偏短;全文结构较为严谨;请注意分段。

用户练习作文:

My Dream Being a good teacher is my dream. I think a good teacher can not only teach students knowledge but also inspire students to come to a bright future. When I was a little girl, I have always admired all my teachers. They seemed so knowledgeable and they were likely know everything. I still remember my math teacher of third grade. He is a smart young man. Whenever I was confused by a difficult math question, he always could give me a suitable tip on time. Another teacher have impressed me deeply is Ms Ren, who was my language teacher. She was so beautiful in my mind. I dreamed of becoming a beautiful good teacher like her one day.

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