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My Dream Being a good teacher is my dream. I think a good teacher can not only teach students knowledge but also inspire students to come to a bright future. When I was a little girl, I have always admired all my teachers. They seemed so knowledgeable and they were likely know everything. I still remember my math teacher of third grade. He is a smart young man. Whenever I was confused by a difficult math question, he always could give me a suitable tip on time. Another teacher have impressed me deeply is Ms Ren, who was my language teacher. She was so beautiful in my mind. I dreamed of becoming a beautiful good teacher like her one day.