作者词汇表达较为熟练,学术词汇使用不是很多;作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;行文稍欠流畅,应适当增加连接词的使用;请注意分段。
I have decided to write a little paragraph for myself everyday from now on, which can practice my expression ability and also improve my writing level. I belive that one day I will stand a big stage, then conquer the world by my brain and skill of language. I am expecting that day. I will be a mother as well, and I will be the first teacher of my baby. Therefore,I have no excuses to give up learning. I have to go ahead.