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My Favorite Sport My favorite sport is playing football. I fell in love with playing football by chance.One day, I picked up a football when going home and then I played it with my friends. From then on, I loved playing football deeply. I often played it and competed with my classmates with this football. As for me, my favorite football star is Beckham from Britain. Besides, to be a professional football player is my biggest dream.