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It's great to pay for the carvings on the fake wall Diffrerent people have different opinions on the chargement of building the fake wall of the Great Wall in Beijing for carvings on each brick. As for me, it's great to pay for the carvings on the fake wall for it can protect the places of interest from graffiti. Personally, it's disgusting to see the graffiti on China's best know cultural relics. Last time, when I and my friends travelled to the Palace Musuem, we saw the walls full of graffiti, most of which is their names or words of love. It's really meaningless to leave them on the walls. Worse still, it polluted the cultural relics and may damage them. As reported, a fake wall has been built and each brick will be charged for 999 yuan, which is good news. For one hand, it can satisfy tourists' idea to leave something behind. For the other hand, it can protect the cultural relics from graffiti. All in all, the advantages of building a fake wall outweighs the disadvantages.