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假设你是红星中学高三一班的学生李华，为校刊英语园地写一篇题为“Our Spring Outing” 的英文稿件。 请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，叙述上周你们班从准备春游到春游结束的完整过程。
注意： 词数不少于60.
提示词： 游乐园 amusement park
垃圾箱 bin
句法知识很棒，若增加一些从句的使用，文章会更出色；文章词汇表达比较灵活，高级词汇的使用要继续加强；上下文衔接欠佳，文章层次欠清晰，建议加强连接词和衔接词的积累。
My Spring Outing Before starting our spring out, I and my classmates have prepared well. We planned to go to the amusement park. When beginning our spring out, we first climbed the mountains. Along the way, we found a great amount of rubbish so we collected them and put them into bins. Though tiring, we thought it a meaningful trip.
