高一英语作文模拟题:关于汽车

拼写很棒，可适当增加高级词汇的使用；增加一些从句的使用，文章会更不错；建议加强过渡词和衔接词的积累，文章结构不严谨。

The approver think the car is a convenient、rapid and comfortable vehicle.It reflects the people's living condition has improved.The country has become strong.It makes other industries development quickly.The approver think the car's off-gas pollution is hard.If there are too much cars it will influence the traffic and lead too much accidents.The question of how to park is increasingly prominent.