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Tom's usually get up at 6 o'clock.And then go to school at 6:15.He's mother tell him can't eat outside food because unhealthy and can't listen to music on school days.after dinner he have to writer homework.So he can't to watch tv on school nights.TOm be back home by 12:00 in the morning and by 9:20 in the evening.