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I often go to cenema with my parents on every sunday because i love movie.My parents love this too.My favorite movie is "police story".chenglong action is my favorite star.I like his moive.He encourage me to against bad people and plug away at work.He's movie includ adventure and action.that's very excitement.so that's my favorite movie.