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I often go to cinema with my parents every sunday.Because i love film.My parents love this too.My favorite film is "police story".chenglong action is my favorite star.I like his film.He encourage me to against bad person and plug away at work.He's film includ adventure and action.that's very excitement.so that's my favorite film.