错误句子很少,但从句使用不熟练;作者词汇表达较丰富,高级词汇需继续加强,拼写检查要重视;结构不严谨,行文不流畅。
Sam got up at 6:ooam yesterday. Then he rode bike to garden and had a fun. By noon, he had breakfast with his parents in McDonald's. In the afternoon, Sam and his classmate were playing basketball in the school from 4:00pm till 6:oopm. After dinner, Sam and his father together go for a walk, during that time, his father bought a CD of classical music for him. What a interesting day Sam had!