作者能较熟练、灵活地使用词汇,建议要多使用高级词汇;简单句偏多了;层次不够清晰,文中很少使用衔接词。
MY net friend MY net friend he is from China.I and him meeting QQ every day.he's a humor boy.he is sixteen-years -old .He usually talk about him grangfather took him to go to fishing.He like go fishing.Because go fishing can increase patients and feeling about outdoor lights.And other also can accompany him old grandfather.he know him very alone.No money no work is very boring.so he as long as have time.He always go to him grandfather famer to help.