词汇表达较灵活准确,高级词汇使用过少,另外注意文中个别的拼写错误;简单句偏多了;语言不流畅。
My busy day Today is sunday.I with my best friends Tony going to play basketball on the morning.from 8:00-10:00.We are very happy and tierd. at noon we has lunch in the Mcdonecal. After then.I called my parents go to movies. Because today is jack chan film showing at.until on the dinner.I with my best friends play basketball again. these is unforgettable day. happy and tierd common happen.