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现在你的家乡是什么季节？天气怎么样？人们在这样的天气里都干什么？根据提示写一篇介绍你们家乡天气的短文。
winter, windy and cold, wear coats and scarves, in restaurants, in the park， have a good time
文中词汇表达较丰富恰当，但高级词汇稍显不足；加强一些长句和复杂句的使用；建议加强过渡词和衔接词的积累，文章结构不严谨。
My hometown weather Today is 29 april 17.My hometown got summer soon.My hometown is located to the south of China.There is always temperate around year.But it's have a lot of rain.so there is very dump. Today is sunday.I with my parents walk to the park .there having many people fishing.And kids running around the grassland.Another kids fly the kite.Because having big windy. I enjoy this.Have wind and sunshine.
