语句间的衔接成分用得不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;作者句法很棒,合理使用了复杂句;作者词汇基础不错,在高级词汇的积累上还要再接再厉。
At first, I don't agree with this opinion that the Dialects are just as acceptable in public place, due to there are a lot of people from many places of our country to work and study in the same big city, such as Beijing, Shanghai, Shenzhen etc. so it is necessary for us to speak in mandarin as the standard language in order to we can better communicate with each other smoothly in public place, especially for teaching language, it is the most important for us to unity the language to teach, but not displaced, after all, the mandarin is most popular in all provinces of China. Of course, we can speak familiar dialect to our family members, which is very simple and convenience communicate way between each other. In a word, we will use different communicate ways in different places, because we should respect everyone around ourselves so that we can better mutual understand and trust.